The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. the second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which was result from this energy use

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. the second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which was result from this energy use
The first pie chart illustrates Australian household consumers on average. In second pie chart depicts the greenhouse gas
emmissions
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emissions
of 6 different types. Units are measured in percentage in both pie charts.
Overall
, as can be seen in
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chart, the highest proportion of energy was heating.
On the other hand
, cooling not only was the lowest for energy use but
also
was the smallest among other emissions. In the first case, heating and water heating comprise approximately three-quarters of total energy use 42% and 30% respectively. Refrigeration, lighting and cooling comprise only small portions of 7%, 4% and 2% respectively. In the second
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, water heating was the highest contribution of greenhouse gas 32%. The figure for other appliances was 28%, which was nearly tow-fold the number for heating 15%. The remaining were lighting and cooling comprising about one in ten of total greenhouse gas.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Energy consumption
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Sustainable practices
  • Energy efficiency
  • Renewable energy
  • Fossil fuels
  • Carbon footprint
  • Eco-friendly appliances
  • Insulation
  • Solar panels
  • Recycling
  • Climate change
  • Kilowatt-hour (kWh)
  • Emissions-intensive
  • Energy audit
  • Smart meters
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