The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. the second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which was result from this energy use
The first pie chart illustrates Australian household consumers on average. In second pie chart depicts the greenhouse gas
emmissions
of 6 different types. Units are measured in percentage in both pie charts.
Correct your spelling
emissions
Overall
, as can be seen in first
chart, the highest proportion of energy was heating. Change the article
the first
On the other hand
, cooling not only was the lowest for energy use but also
was the smallest among other emissions.
In the first case, heating and water heating comprise approximately three-quarters of total energy use 42% and 30% respectively. Refrigeration, lighting and cooling comprise only small portions of 7%, 4% and 2% respectively.
In the second senario
, water heating was the highest contribution of greenhouse gas 32%. The figure for other appliances was 28%, which was nearly tow-fold the number for heating 15%. The remaining were lighting and cooling comprising about one in ten of total greenhouse gas.Correct your spelling
scenario
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