The graph below shows the hours of teaching per year done by each teacher in four different countries in 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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allocated the lowest time period for teaching in upper secondary grades.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words teacher, japan, spain, usa, hours, teachers, grade with synonyms.
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