The graph below shows the hours of teaching per year done by each teacher in four different countries in 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the annual time spent by each
teacher
for training in 2001 in Japan
, Spain
, Iceland, and the USA
. Overall
highest teaching hours
in all three different grades were observed by the USA
teachers
, while
in Japan
, Spain
, and Iceland primary teachers
were allocated the same time period for primary teaching.
The hours
used by the upper secondary teacher
for training in Spain
are only seconds to the USA
same grade
teachers
, meanwhile Japan
same teacher
used almost 600 hours
per year. In contrast
with the four countries, the teachers
in Japan
allocated the lowest time period for teaching in upper secondary grades.
The Iceland secondary grade
teacher
taught 800 hours
annually in 2001, furthermore
it only seconds to the USA
same grade
teaching hours
. Both Japanese and Spain
teachers
allocated 600 hours
for teaching secondary grade
students ,However
all types of Add a comma
,However
teachers
in four different countries allocated at least 600 hours
annually for teaching in 2001.Submitted by chiranthiranwala on
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