The graph below shows the hours of teaching per year done by each teacher in four different countries in 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the hours of teaching per year done by each teacher in four different countries in 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the annual time spent by each
teacher
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for training in 2001 in
Japan
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,
Spain
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, Iceland, and the
USA
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.
Overall
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highest teaching
hours
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in all three different grades were observed by the
USA
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teachers
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,
while
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in
Japan
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,
Spain
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, and Iceland primary
teachers
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were allocated the same time period for primary teaching. The
hours
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used by the upper secondary
teacher
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for training in
Spain
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are only seconds to the
USA
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same
grade
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teachers
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, meanwhile
Japan
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same
teacher
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used almost 600
hours
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per year.
In contrast
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with the four countries, the
teachers
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in
Japan
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allocated the lowest time period for teaching in upper secondary grades. The Iceland secondary
grade
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teacher
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taught 800
hours
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annually in 2001,
furthermore
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it only seconds to the
USA
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same
grade
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teaching
hours
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. Both Japanese and
Spain
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teachers
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allocated 600
hours
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for teaching secondary
grade
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students ,
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However
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all types of
teachers
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in four different countries allocated at least 600
hours
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annually for teaching in 2001.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words teacher, japan, spain, usa, hours, teachers, grade with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual hours of teaching
  • teaching workload
  • educational systems
  • teacher-student ratio
  • significantly
  • slightly
  • noticeably
  • gap
  • highest/lowest number of hours
  • compare
  • contrast
  • reflect
  • variations
  • distribution of teaching hours
  • average
  • respectively
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