The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The chart illustrates the survey findings about
people
's
coffee
and
tea
purchasing and habits of drinking in five different Australian cities in the
last
four weeks.
Overall
, it can be seen that the most popular habit of buying and drinking
coffee
and
tea
was going to a café in
Sydney
,
Melbourne
,
Brisbane
, and
Hobart
over a four-week time period.
Likewise
, the least preferable way of purchasing and drinking was bringing fresh
coffee
to all cities.
However
, in
Adelaide
, the majority of citizens liked to buy instant
coffee
.
To begin
with,going to a café for
coffee
or
tea
in the
last
four weeks in
Hobart
stood at nearly 63% which is almost the same as
Melbourne
(64%).
Similarly
, more than 60% of
People
in
Sydney
, prefer to go to a café for
coffee
or
tea
while
it is just over 55% in
Brisbane
. In
Adelaide
, just below 50% of
people
wanted to go to a café for
coffee
or
tea
.
Secondly
, bringing instant
coffee
started at nearly 54% in
Hobart
,
this
figure fell to just below 50% in
Adelaide
. In the same way, citizens of
Brisbane
around 52% bring instant
coffee
,
this
figure fell to roughly 48% and 45% in
Melbourne
and
Sydney
respectively.
Finally
, bringing fresh
coffee
by
people
of
Hobart
stood at almost 38% in the
last
four weeks
whereas
in
Adelaide
this
amount fell to just below 35% which is quite close to
Brisbane
(33%).
However
,
this
proportion rose to around 42% in
Melbourne
and approximately 44% in
Sydney
.
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