The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
The graph illustrates the
usage
of global water
in 3 different sectors ( agriculture, industrial and domestic) between 1900 to 2000, while
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reveals
water
consumption in Brazil
and Congo
in 3 various types ( population
, irrigation and consumption per person) in 2000.
Overall
, the global water
which was used by agriculture was more that
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than
other
two groups. Correct article usage
the other
Additionally
, the population
of Brazil
was almost 30 times more than Congo
and the average rate of water
consumption was approximately 40 times more than Congo
citizens.
In 1990, almost 500km2 of water
was used for agricultural parts, while
this
number was less than 10km2 for both industrial and domestic parts. The usage
of water
for all 3 sectors significantly increased in the given period. In 2000, the usage
of agriculture
sector was 3000, Correct article usage
the agriculture
while
this
number was almost 1000 and 500 for industry and domestic usage
, repectively
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respectively
population
of Brazil
was 176 million, while
the population
of Congo
was 5.2 million in 2000. However
, the irrigation lands of Brazil
was
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than
Congo
with 26500 km2 for Brazil
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100 km2
Congo
. Brazilian people consumed 359m3 water
per person in comparison with Congo
citizens, who consumed only 8m3 water
per person.Submitted by shima.majidansari on
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