The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The supplied pie chart depicts the employment status of Anthropology graduates from a particular university after completing their undergraduate degree course,
while
the table illustrates how much the anthropologists in three different types of employment earned after five years. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is apparent that
while
the percentage of sociology alumni doing full-time jobs after receiving their undergraduate degree was the highest, the opposite was true for those choosing part-time work and pursuing
further
education.
Furthermore
, after 5 years of work, the proportions of anthropologists working as freelance consultants and in the authority part with the lowest salary range were exactly the same,
whereas
the highest figure can be seen in that of those working in the government sector with the highest-paid. As regards the pie chart, the bulk of Anthropology alumni had a full-time job, at 52%,
while
the proportions of those working part-time and the unemployed were significantly lower, at only 15% and 12%, respectively. Meanwhile, the figures for sociology graduates choosing full-time postgraduate study and the unknown group were identical, at 8%.
In addition
, only 5% of grads majoring in the science of humans chose to do part-time jobs and pursue postgrad study simultaneously. Turning to the table, Anthropology graduates with a salary range between 25,000 and 49,999 dollars accounted for the smallest proportion of those working as freelance consultants and in the government part after 5 years, at only 5%, which was half the figure for private companies.
By contrast
, the percentages of those working as freelance consultants, in the authority sector and in private companies with the most generous earnings in the table were considerably higher, at 40%, 50% and 30%, respectively.
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