Many animals are being hunted to the brink of extinction in order to fulfill the demand and greed of mankind for decorative purposes as well as for other reasons, such as traditional medicine. Why does this happen? Will this improve or get worse in the future
Nowadays, hunting is at its peak worldwide because of in the upcoming years.
this
, some species
are becoming extinct. Other factors also
play a huge role in the extinction of animals
such
as Research Purposes, Medicines, Animal Products and Food. In this
essay, I will discuss the reasons for the extinction of the species
and its situation in the future.
To commence with, in the last
century
, hunting was so common that it was considered a source of entertainment. To explicate, In the late 16th century
, the Cheetah population were over 10,000 in India and due to
hunting it was reduced to a few thousand by the end of the 18th century
and it was finally
declared extinct by the Indian Government in the mid-19th century
. For instance
, emperors were very fond of hunting and they used to kill several hundreds of animals
in a day for ,them it was a sports activity. There were no laws formed during that period due to
which there was a sudden decline in animal population.
Furthermore
, by the end of the 19th century
, around the world, there was more research conducted on Animals
to develop new medicines to treat various diseases. Moreover
, big companies such
as Woodland make animal products such
as Leather Bags, Shoes and Wallets and because of this
many animals
are getting killed just for the sake of human needs. For example
, these days, people are using products that come from Animals
such
as Woolen Clothes, Leather Jackets and many more such
items which is a major cause of concern as no policies made by authorities to control this
situation. Thus
, it will create a major problem in future because more species
going to be extinct in the future and will adversely affect or disturb nature by breaking the food chain.
To conclude
, these things started for sports and entertainment purposes and later became addictions due to
which some species
were lost from nature. In addition
, the greed of mankind will eventually extinct more species
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