.In the future people may longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phone. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?
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day
by day
. As a result
, past
decades people Change preposition
in past
payments
doing by Add a missing verb
have payments
cash
. However
, this
time most of the community always,
tries to do cashless. In my point of, Remove the comma
apply
thus
, folk reduce use
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the use
money
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of money
definitely
; in Rephrase
apply
future
will be happen
for the currency. Change the verb form
happen
Furthermore
, somebody
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some
does
not like Correct subject-verb agreement
do
give
up using Fix the infinitive
to give
cash
. They
are many reasons for Correct pronoun usage
There
this
situation. Nevertheless
, i
would like to say, Change the capitalization
I
one
reason is society Correct word choice
that one
like
to manage there are Replace the word
likes
money
.By the way, in my point of view I am going to explain, further
paragraph with relevant example.
On the Change preposition
in further
one
hand, currently
most of them live Add a comma
,currently
with
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apply
busy
life. Add an article
a busy
Therefore
, they not enough times go bank doing for instilments in spite of pay by
online or Wrong verb form
paying
cards
. Change preposition
through cards
For instance
, somebody every month wants to pay their utility bills. Previously they went to the location pay
by Fix the infinitive
to pay
cash
. This
time slowly convert to online transitions. For that humans are using by
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apply
card
or phones. In the Fix the agreement mistake
cards
future
humans are
will be very busy with life, better than now and in Unnecessary verb
apply
future
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the future
one
day
money
will be can’t touch by hand. Because, of that previously I mentions
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mention
one
day
will happens
.
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happen
On the other hand
, some humans not be happy to give up cash
.one
reason is they want to manage their accounts. For these main reasons is, when we do transitions by card or phone sometimes we unable to control our budget. But if we Capitalize word
One
something
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do something
by
Change preposition
with
cash
automatically control our budget. For instance
, if we go to shopping
mall Correct article usage
a shopping
cant
Correct your spelling
can't
controls
our limit when we pay by card or phone. Wrong verb form
control
Nevertheless
, we pay by cash
we can controls
our emotions.
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control
To
conclusion, in Change preposition
In
future
we unable to see money
in
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on
the
paper and Correct article usage
apply
somebody
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some
does
not like Verb problem
will
give
up Fix the infinitive
to give
cash
because their
want to manage Correct pronoun usage
they
financial
Correct pronoun usage
their financial
statues
.Correct your spelling
status
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