.In the future people may longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phone. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?

Nowadays technologies are improving
day
by
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decades people
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doing by
cash
.
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,
this
time most of the community always
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tries to do cashless. In my point of,
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, folk reduce
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; in
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for the currency.
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,
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not like
give
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up using
cash
.
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are many reasons for
this
situation.
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would like to say,
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reason is society
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to manage there are
money
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most of them live
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busy
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life.
Therefore
, they not enough times go bank doing for instilments in spite of
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online or
cards
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For instance
, somebody every month wants to pay their utility bills. Previously they went to the location
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by
cash
.
This
time slowly convert to online transitions. For that humans are using
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card
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or phones. In the
future
humans
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will be very busy with life, better than now and in
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one
day
money
will be can’t touch by hand. Because, of that previously I
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one
day
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On the other hand
, some humans not be happy to give up
cash
.
one
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reason is they want to manage their accounts. For these main reasons is, when we do transitions by card or phone sometimes we unable to control our budget. But if we
something
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by
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cash
automatically control our budget.
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, if we go to
shopping
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mall
cant
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can't
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our limit when we pay by card or phone.
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, we pay by
cash
we can
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our emotions.
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conclusion, in
future
we unable to see
money
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paper and
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does
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not like
give
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up
cash
because
their
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want to manage
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statues
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cashless society
  • digital payment systems
  • financial institutions
  • transparency
  • illegal activities
  • privacy reasons
  • digital trace
  • technologically challenged
  • cybersecurity threats
  • technical failures
  • cultural attachments
  • resistant to change
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