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Home is the basic necessity of everyone. A government should provide home to those who cannot afford it. To what extent you agree or disagree

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It has always been argued that the house plays an important role for each and every one. Higher authorities need to give those facilities to homeless people. I partially agree with
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 essay shall shed light upon my perspective in subsequent paragraphs. Foremost, why the
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 should provide a home to those who cannot afford it?
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 is because it reduces the crime rate. If law authorities provide homes to those people who are not able to purchase them, they could commit crimes as it is a basic necessity for every person, so it is a better way once the supreme gives that amenity to needy ones.
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, a survey conducted by Harward University revealed that in (2016) the Indian
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 provided more than 600 hundred homes to overlanders with the assistance of
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 felony is decreasing continuously. Paradoxically, the fundamental reason behind my disagreement is that statutory bodies have other crucial work
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 as the construction of roads, giving academic knowledge to the public, medical, transportation and many more. Law authorities ought to not only provide job facilities but
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 EMI on buying a house with
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 they might easily purchase their own accommodations and live happily with their family members.
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, an article published by The Tribune newspaper showed that approximately 65% of individuals
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 satisfied
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 the
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 because they get advantages related to purchasing
house
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 an effortless way.
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, it is beneficial for people and society because it would decline antisocial activities, but it puts the burden on the
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 as they have other eminent work
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 is necessary for the development of the community.

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