You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorect. write a letter to the editor of the magazin.In your letter correct the information in the article explan why it is important for the magazin to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to you regarding the article called "The Life with Travel" which published
on 22nd of May in the Australian magazine that socializing the wrong information about my city is Galle.
Since I have seen Add a missing verb
was published
this
, I have been dismayed. You mentioned that the temple of Rumassala has a variety of herbal ecosystem which comes from King Rawana in India but I consider that It should be corrected as in Sri Lanka
Moreover
, the majority of tourists and native people refer to your paper article when
before coming to their eye-catching places. Thus
, Sometimes such
of these misinformation
can Change the determiner
this misinformation
bedecreased
in our tourism industry. So I think you and your group should be responsible for every word not only before but Correct your spelling
be decreased
decreased
also
after the publication.
I would like to recommend to you some possible solutions to prevent of
Change preposition
apply
this
situation, such
as you can create a table for approval documentation and a proofreading team to correct mistakes in your journal.
Hopefully, I will receive positive feedback next newspaper
Thank you.
Yours faithfully,
ShaiSubmitted by shainikellapatha on
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