You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Tamanna,
I am so glad to hear from you after
such
a long time. How are you and how is
Change the verb form
are
aunty
and Capitalize word
Aunty
uncle
doingCapitalize word
Uncle
.
After you got married everyone thought that your world Change the punctuation
?
will
evolve around your husband and your in-laws. But I am over the moon hearing from you that Wrong verb form
would
your
aiming Correct pronoun usage
you
in doing
something in life and I will try my best to guide you. To be honest in Change preposition
to do
this
2 years of my Correct determiner usage
these
job
life experience after completing my college degree, I feel that job
is the real deal not
college. It's almost Add the comma(s)
,not
the
scam for students who are struggling financially and Correct article usage
a
dull headed
. They are just wasting their time and money. I feel after all these years going to college and studying with your juniors will be quite embarrassing and you won't appreciate it much. But getting a good Add a hyphen
dull-headed
job
near your home will be fruitful for you, as not only you will be financially independent but you will also
regain you
respect in the eyes of your husband and your in-laws. By the way, I remember you did a short course on graphics design which you enjoyed a lot. So I suggest you Change the pronoun
your
to
look for a Remove the particle
apply
job
position which is related to graphics design. My friend do take your decisions wisely and stay safe and take care.
Sincerely Yours,
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.