The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with the date they opened, kilometers of route, and passenger numbers per year in millions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with the date they opened, kilometers of route, and passenger numbers per year in millions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates data about the
subway
railway
system in
London
, Paris,
Tokyo
, Washington DC, Kyoto, and Los Angeles with given information about the date it opened, the distance of each
route
, and the
number
of
passengers
per
year
.
Overall
, it is clear from the information that
London
, Paris, and
Tokyo
had the highest
number
of
passengers
and longest underground railways compared to Washington DC, Kyoto, and Los Angeles. In 1863, the first
subway
railway
station
opened in
London
with nearly 400 Km of
route
.
However
, the
number
of
passengers
per
year
(in millions) did not exceed 775,
while
in Paris, it was 1191 million per
year
, with almost half of the
route
length. In
Tokyo
, 64 years after
London
station
opening,
Tokyo
railway
station
opened officially with just 155 Km of
route
, but with the highest
number
of
passengers
using the
subway
per
year
among all the other counties mentioned. In 1976, the Washington DC
subway
station
opened its doors for
passengers
with 126
kilometers
Change the spelling
kilometres
show examples
of
route
, but the
number
of users stopped at 144 per
year
. In 1981 and 2001, Kyoto and Los Angeles opened their stations, respectively.
Moreover
, the length of the
railway
did not exceed 28 Km,
whereas
the passenger
number
also
does not break the edge of 50 million per
year
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • underground railways
  • kilometers of route
  • passenger numbers
  • annually
  • compare and contrast
  • mega-cities
  • public transportation infrastructure
  • extensive network
  • rapid transit
  • capacity
  • commuter volume
  • inauguration date
  • modernization
  • vintage
  • urban development
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