The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with the date they opened, kilometers of route, and passenger numbers per year in millions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with the date they opened, kilometers of route, and passenger numbers per year in millions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The table illustrates data about the
subway
Use synonyms
railway
Use synonyms
system in
London
Use synonyms
, Paris,
Tokyo
Use synonyms
, Washington DC, Kyoto, and Los Angeles with given information about the date it opened, the distance of each
route
Use synonyms
, and the
number
Use synonyms
of
passengers
Use synonyms
per
year
Use synonyms
.
Overall
Linking Words
, it is clear from the information that
London
Use synonyms
, Paris, and
Tokyo
Use synonyms
had the highest
number
Use synonyms
of
passengers
Use synonyms
and longest underground railways compared to Washington DC, Kyoto, and Los Angeles. In 1863, the first
subway
Use synonyms
railway
Use synonyms
station
Use synonyms
opened in
London
Use synonyms
with nearly 400 Km of
route
Use synonyms
.
However
Linking Words
, the
number
Use synonyms
of
passengers
Use synonyms
per
year
Use synonyms
(in millions) did not exceed 775,
while
Linking Words
in Paris, it was 1191 million per
year
Use synonyms
, with almost half of the
route
Use synonyms
length. In
Tokyo
Use synonyms
, 64 years after
London
Use synonyms
station
Use synonyms
opening,
Tokyo
Use synonyms
railway
Use synonyms
station
Use synonyms
opened officially with just 155 Km of
route
Use synonyms
, but with the highest
number
Use synonyms
of
passengers
Use synonyms
using the
subway
Use synonyms
per
year
Use synonyms
among all the other counties mentioned. In 1976, the Washington DC
subway
Use synonyms
station
Use synonyms
opened its doors for
passengers
Use synonyms
with 126
kilometers
Change the spelling
kilometres
show examples
of
route
Use synonyms
, but the
number
Use synonyms
of users stopped at 144 per
year
Use synonyms
. In 1981 and 2001, Kyoto and Los Angeles opened their stations, respectively.
Moreover
Linking Words
, the length of the
railway
Use synonyms
did not exceed 28 Km,
whereas
Linking Words
the passenger
number
Use synonyms
also
Linking Words
does not break the edge of 50 million per
year
Use synonyms
.
Submitted by albishirt on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words subway, railway, london, tokyo, route, number, passengers, year, station with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "data" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • underground railways
  • kilometers of route
  • passenger numbers
  • annually
  • compare and contrast
  • mega-cities
  • public transportation infrastructure
  • extensive network
  • rapid transit
  • capacity
  • commuter volume
  • inauguration date
  • modernization
  • vintage
  • urban development
What to do next:
Look at other essays: