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Friendships that take place online are not as meaningful as those where people meet each other face to face. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Friendship
 is
most
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the most
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 trustworthy relationship of an individual. It is being argued that
relationship
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relationships
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 which are in-
person
 are proved more fruitful than online ones. I personally
postulate
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 with the above statement. In
this
 essay, I will give reasons to support my opinion.
To begin
 with, most of the time people only showcase their lucrative lifestyle on the internet to attract
other
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others
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,
however
 , they may just be showing their fake life
moreover
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, by using online means we may not be able to know their behaviour and their true ambitions.
for example
 , In 2021 , there was a news article published in the
main stream
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 media which
states
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 that
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a honeytrap
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honeytrap
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honeytraps
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made
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 by the
pakistani
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 army under which their female agents
honeytrapped
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honey trapped
honey-trapped
inidan
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Indian
 officials to gather crucial
infomations
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information
.
hence
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,online
friendship
 can
sometime
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 be unfavourable for the
person
. To fortify
further
, the cases of cybercrime are augmenting with the passing time and online interaction with the people
are
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 the major factor fuiling the situation.
Moreover
, as the
friendship
 is online they can manipulate the
person
 to do bad
deed
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deeds
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 and they can
also
 never be trased under some circumstances. To elaborate
further
 ,
according to
 the statistics of 2020-2021 , the
person
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people
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 who are victims of
the
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online fraud are mostly the
one
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ones
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 who became
friend
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friends
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 through some online site and got fished.
therefore
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, doing
friendship
 online is a risky job.
To conclude
thisk
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this
, It is clear from the above discussion that doing
friendship
 online can be awful for
person
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a person
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.
Therefore
 , people should more focus on making friends
in-
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in person
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person
 with whom they can share their highs and lows.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • non-verbal communication cues
  • depth of understanding
  • spontaneous
  • genuine moments
  • shared interests
  • sense of physical presence
  • evolve
  • constant connectivity
  • nurture friendships
  • busy schedules
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