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The maps provide a comparison of the town of Seatown and the changes it has witnessed from 1995 to the present day.

The maps provide a comparison of the town of Seatown which is adjacent to the ocean and the changes it has witnessed from the year 1998 to the present day. Over the approximately 30-year period depicted in the maps, Seatown underwent some major changes, with a dramatic increase in infrastructure
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 as housing areas and restaurants and a reduction in farmland being the most noticeable. The most prominent change is that the forest park and farmland which used to be situated in the northeast corner have been demolished and replaced by a golf course and some tennis courts. The fishing port which originally stood on the south side has been removed.
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, several shops and the fish market which was right above it are now rows of restaurants and apartments. Another significant difference is that a sharp growth in the number of housing took place at the present day to cater for the increasing population,
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 an extra road is constructed to provide access.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "provide" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "comparison" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "provide" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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