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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, say where you think you left the papers explain why they are so important tell the manager what you want him/her to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, Hope
this
 finds you well. A short time ago I got back after attending a very important meeting at your hotel premises. And after a lot of
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, I just recalled that I have left a very confidential and crucial
file
 at your hotel. As far as I can recall I might have left it in the right corner table at the entrance of the banquet hall. The
file
 is
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black in colour and made of leather fabric. It is securely ziplocked inside a transparent zip bag. The
papers
 inside the
file
 contain documents, signed by one of my clients, and these
papers
 are
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the will The
papers
 inside the
file
contains
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 documents, signed by one of my clients, and these
papers
 are the will of my
client
's declined father.
This
 wheel is the only original evidence for my upcoming lawsuit.
This
 means more than a life to my
client
. If these
papers
 are lost,
then
 my
client
 will be homeless and penniless. If these
papers
 are lost,
then
 my
client
 will lose everything and become homeless and penniless. I earnestly request you
to
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keep the
file
 with you safely once you find it. I will try my best to catch the most immediate flight available to reach your hotel and collect it from you in person. Sincerely yours, Ava
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Dear Sir/Madam,
  • I am writing to inform you that I believe I left some important papers at your hotel.
  • To the best of my recollection, I left the papers in the conference room.
  • These papers are of utmost importance as they contain confidential business information.
  • I kindly request that you or your staff check the conference room and securely send the papers to my address.
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