In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Elder

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The elderly

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population are certainly one of the most vulnerable people. As we know, they usually need specific health care and one part of them

are

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is

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mostly alone. Another group don’t have enough income to provide

by

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apply

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themself

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their

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basic needs.

Firs

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First

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of all, I truly believe that all humans deserve to live their

life

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lives

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with dignity. Indeed, the crucial point is the wellbeing of the old people. If the

government

give them some economic

support

for

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to

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increase

the

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their

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quality of

the

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apply

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life

, it

became

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becomes

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necessary to establish who can receive governmental help.

Moreover

, built

a parameters

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parameters

a parameter

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like monthly income, propriety, and health conditions, that can help to identify who can live in the hospice with governmental

support

. I think in

this

kind of situation the

government

have to give them what

are

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is

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necessary to live their

life

with dignity.

Secondly

, the other side of the coin

tell

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tells

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us that there are old

persons

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people

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who have enough money to spend the

last

part of their time in excellent condition.

However

, they are able to reach high

life

standard

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standards

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like private care, private nurses and family

support

. Of course, in

this

condition

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,condition

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the

government

can invest public money in

other field

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another field

other fields

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. In conclusion, elders are often experiencing loneliness because their family reside far from or don’t have any family

member

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members

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. I assume that the

government

have to take

car

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care

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of the most vulnerable elders who are not able to buy their medication or food.

Nevertheless

, the

government

can provide

to

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apply

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them

some

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with some

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public space

for

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to

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support

this

community and facilitate

relationship

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relationships

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.