Rich countries should allow jobs for skilled and knowledgeable employers who are from poor countries. Do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays the great majority of people support the idea that governments should hire employers from not developed countries,
while
others tend to consider that it will make the economics worse.
Although
the
last
opinion can be right in some cases, I believe that it is better to allow people to work in rich states for many reasons. Let us start by looking at the advantages of recruiting skilled employers. If we start with Katar, it is obvious that workers from various places come in order to make money.
Consequently
, their knowledge
as well as
experience allows them to manage staff and increase profits. So,
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Katar is considered one of the most successful countries in the world. Another good example of
this
system is the USA, where highly skilled workers are valued.
Instead
of reducing the number of migrants, the government focuses on how they can be useful
,
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so that they can be really beneficial for economics. Another major benefit is cultural exchange.
For instance
, In
Singapore
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there are a lot of knowledgeable specialists with different backgrounds almost in every organisation.
Due to
that fact, they have schools, universities, restaurants and public organisations with American, British, Chinese and other national systems of training, education and management.
Moreover
, it is cool to familiarize yourself with the traditions, cuisine, clothes and worldviews of
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. Taking everything into consideration, I would say that we should focus on how to provide a chance to managers from underdeveloped regions rather than forbid it.
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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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