The internet has changed the way we intract with each other now compared to in the past. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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Nowadays, socialization
patterens
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patterns
are unique from previous times
due to
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internet connection. It brings immense
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benefits
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education
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sector through online studies, but
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student
losses
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their exposure
from
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the surrounding areas as they does not feel required to go outside. The foremost advantage of
internet
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the internet
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is all the study
material
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materials
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are
accesable
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accessible
on smart computers. The learners can
do face to face
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have face-to-face
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conversations with their tutors regarding
studies
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their studies
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. Even the children from rural areas who are struggling with transport
facilties
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facilities
can gain education with the internet resources.
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, the
lastest
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report for
developing
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country India says that approximately 90
percent
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of
young
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generation was able to complete their graduation courses through online studies
in
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at
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the time of
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pandemic
covid 19.
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,
the
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traits like personal development and social skills
got
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suffered
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if one can spend most of the time in online attraction.
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people
does
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not feel the need to go out and explore
the
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new places. It will directly affect
on
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their
self confidence
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and communication skills
,
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because without playing in groups or spending time with family and friends, the person only
get
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limited and
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on
others
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others'
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experiences.
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, one can not spend his whole life in front of
mobile
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a mobile
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and
laptops
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laptop
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because
real life
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experiences are more amazing than
vedios
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videos
.
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, the accessible knowledge from distinct parts of
world
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the world
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is one of the astonishing
way
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ways
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of
interaction
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towards society but the exploration
in
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of
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the real world with unique possessions and nature can only be experienced
by
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physical
involvment
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involvement
.
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