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Southland’s main exports in 2000, 2015 and future projection of 2025

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The bar chart demonstrates changes in three main exports
such
 as International
tourism
, dairy and
meat
 products in Southland for three different years 2000, 2023 and predictions for the next two years until 2025 It is interesting to notice that, the biggest interest has been raised in international
tourism
,
whereas
 the need for dairy and
meat
 products will gradually decrease in 2025 Regarding international
tourism
, it gradually increased from almost 8
billion
 euros to 9
billion
 since 2000 and it is supposed to reach 10
billion
 in 2025.
On the other hand
 exports of
meat
 reveal completely an opposite trend, beginning with 6
billion
 euros, it ending up with approximately 5.5
billion
.
Finally
, speaking about dairy products, despite the fact that numbers have rocketed from 7 to 10
billion
 euros from 2000 to 2023, it is projected to decrease to 9.5 in 2025.
Overall
, it’s obvious that the necessity of
meat
 is dropping every year,
while
tourism
 increasing gradually over the period in question
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