The table shows the percentage of the rooms occupied in six hotels during May to September between 1985 and 2000. The table also indicates the star rating of each hotel.
The table depicts information about the proportion of apartments used in six hotels from May to September in five years from 1985 to 2000 with their figure of rating stars for all given hostels.
After analysing the table it was clearly seen that the
hotel
Concorde and the Hamilton had five starts and both do have the same statistic of occupied rooms in 1985 and 1990. Use synonyms
Additionally
, both of these hotels declined their percentage in two later years(1995 and 2000). Linking Words
Besides
, the Linking Words
hotel
tower was the only one with four stars and had a similar percentile in the ages of 1990 and 2000.
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Furthermore
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last
three Linking Words
motel
had 3 stars. Moving to Change to a plural noun
motels
Hotel
Olivia the proportion in the former two years was 90 and 85, and in the latter two ,periods it was 89 and 95 respectively. Use synonyms
Moreover
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Hotel
Hampton had the same Use synonyms
statistic
for all ages except in the year 1995. At ,Fix the agreement mistake
statistics
last
the continental Linking Words
hotel
had nearly 332 apartments collectively throughout the time period.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
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Hamilton and Hampton had the maximum percentage of rooms, Change to a genitive case
hotel's
hotels'
whereas
the resort's Tower and Concorde had a lower number.Linking Words
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