You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change your course. You should include details about: what course are you doing now why you are not satisfied with that course what course you would like to change to.

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Dear Mr. John Onasis, I am writing to request you to change my

course

which I am currently enrolled in at Ulster University. I am Jennifer Ramos,

first-semester

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bachelor's degree

biomedical

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in biomedical

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science student

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the north campus

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the university. I have difficulty understanding the subject as my educational background is not related to

this

topic. I have attended several lectures in the

last

three months and I could not adapt the

course

. I have been stressed about completing my assignments. I consulted with the student counsellor and we

finally

agreed to change the

course

to English Literature, which I have been interested in since my childhood. I am requesting you to change my

course

enrollment to next semester. I

will be appreciated

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it if

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you

can

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could

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refund my

tution

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tuition

fee for the next semester which I paid already. I hope

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can finish the admission procedures within

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the next

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week. The

course

conducting

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conducted

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south

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the south

a south

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campus which is near

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my current accommodation,

Therefore

, I will continue to stay in my current hostel. I look forward to hearing from you, Yours sincerely, Jennifer Ramos.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

184 words

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