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You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change your course. You should include details about: what course are you doing now why you are not satisfied with that course what course you would like to change to.

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Dear Mr. John Onasis, I am writing to request you to change my
course
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 which I am currently enrolled in at Ulster University. I am Jennifer Ramos,
first-semester
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a first-semester
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 bachelor's degree
biomedical
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in biomedical
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 science student
in
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on
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 the north campus
in
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 the university. I have difficulty understanding the subject as my educational background is not related to
this
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 topic. I have attended several lectures in the
last
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 three months and I could not adapt the
course
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. I have been stressed about completing my assignments. I consulted with the student counsellor and we
finally
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 agreed to change the
course
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 to English Literature, which I have been interested in since my childhood. I am requesting you to change my
course
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 enrollment to next semester. I
will be appreciated
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if
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it if
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 you
can
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 refund my
tution
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tuition
 fee for the next semester which I paid already. I hope
i
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 can finish the admission procedures within
next
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the next
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 week. The
course
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 is
conducting
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in
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on
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south
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the south
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 campus which is near
to
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apply
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my current accommodation,
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, I will continue to stay in my current hostel. I look forward to hearing from you, Yours sincerely, Jennifer Ramos.

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