Some people believe that if a child commits a crime, they should be punished while others think it is the child's parent who should be punished. DIscuss both views and give your opinion.

It must be recognized that punishing young offenders is a salient issue that needs to be addressed, others believe that it is their

children

who should be punished for their

children

's actions

instead

. It is the opinion of the writer that a child who commits

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should be harshly punished. It is essential to understand that

children

who commit

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have to be punished for their, as it will prevent them from taking

such

actions again. The biggest benefit of

children

being punished is that it will

also

act as a warning to the kids

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so that they would have to think about the consequences before they even do anything.

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, punishment should be applied

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all juvenile delinquents. Despite these, some people still believe that it is the parents who should be punished

instead

. They argued that

children

are greatly influenced by their

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and irresponsible or abusive parents affect the kids in a negative way leading to young offenses.

This

point does have credibility, but

children

are not only influenced by their parents but

also

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their

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too, so they could have

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learnt negative from the outside rather than from their family. The writer believes that communities should enforce laws on young offenders and find the appropriate to punish them so that they will not do the same things again and

also

make them more responsible with their behaviours. Because of

this

, rehabilitating them and

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rid of all aggression from their minds give them a better life.

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,

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them develop a sense of responsibility and

developments

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of behaviours are essential points that need to be considered.

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, the appropriate punishments should be imposed so that the

children

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become a better version of themselves.