The two pie charts illustrate the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010.

The two pie charts illustrate the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010.

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, the shopping sales consist

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sectors. It is an electronic

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appliance, food and beverage, home furnishings and video games. In 2005 the most significant online

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sector

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electronics and

appliance

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appliances

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and in 2010 the most popular

sector

was food and beverage.

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there

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minimal changes in

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period . One of the key changes over

this

decade is the former falling from 25% to fifteen per cent in

sector

« home furnishings » and the latter rising from 22% to

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per cent in

sector

« food and beverage ». The other two sectors

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also

had changes.

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electronics and

appliance

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had a drop with a difference

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%.

Furthermore

, video games increased by five per cent.