The two pie charts illustrate the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010.
The two pie charts illustrate the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010.
Overall
, the shopping sales consist four
sectors. It is an electronic Change preposition
of four
and
appliance, food and beverage, home furnishings and video games.
In 2005 the most significant online Correct word choice
apply
sale
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sales
sector
is
electronics and Wrong verb form
was
appliance
and in 2010 the most popular Fix the agreement mistake
appliances
sector
was food and beverage. Also
there Add a comma
,Also
was
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were
a
minimal changes in Correct article usage
apply
five
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a
years
period . One of the key changes over Correct your spelling
five-year
this
decade is the former falling from 25% to fifteen per cent in sector
« home furnishings » and the latter rising from 22% to thirty two
per cent in Add a hyphen
thirty-two
sector
« food and beverage ».
The other two sectors are
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apply
also
had changes. For
example
electronics and Add a comma
,example
appliance
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appliances
is
had a drop with a differenceUnnecessary verb
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5
%. Change preposition
of 5
Furthermore
, video games increased by five per cent.Submitted by dnm.best on
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