The bar chart below shows the proportions of English men and women of different ages who were living alone in 2011. the pie chart compaes the numbers of bedrooms in these one-person households.
The bar chart reveals information about the English males and females in 8 different age groups, who lived alone in 2011. The pie chart shows data about the number of
bedrooms
in the houses with one resident.
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individuals had the highest percentage of living alone, Use synonyms
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the 85-year-old
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group had the lowest. Most of the houses with one resident had two Change preposition
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bedrooms
and less than 2% of one-person households had 5 or more Use synonyms
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In 2011, less than 50% of all age groups of English people lived alone. The Use synonyms
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ratio of individuals who had a private house was more than 50% among 16 to 64 Correct quantifier usage
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old individuals were less keen on living alone with Use synonyms
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30% for 75-84 Correct your spelling
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old, just less than 30% for 75-84 and just over 20% for 85 and over, respectively.
In the case of the number of Use synonyms
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, 35.4% of private houses with one resident had 2 Use synonyms
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with 29.8% and Use synonyms
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, Only less than 7% of one-person households had 4 or more Linking Words
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