The bar chart below shows the proportions of English men and women of different ages who were living alone in 2011. the pie chart compaes the numbers of bedrooms in these one-person households.

The bar chart below shows the proportions of English men and women of different ages who were living alone in 2011. the pie chart compaes the numbers of bedrooms in these one-person households.
The bar chart reveals information about the English males and females in 8 different age groups, who lived alone in 2011. The pie chart shows data about the number of
bedrooms
in the houses with one resident.
Overall
, 34-
49
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years
individuals had the highest percentage of living alone,
while
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the 85-year-old
years
and
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group had the lowest. Most of the houses with one resident had two
bedrooms
and less than 2% of one-person households had 5 or more
bedrooms
. In 2011, less than 50% of all age groups of English people lived alone. The
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ratio of individuals who had a private house was more than 50% among 16 to 64
ages
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groups of
mens
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men
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and women.
On the other hand
, more than 64
years
old individuals were less keen on living alone with
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approximately
30% for 75-84
years
old, just less than 30% for 75-84 and just over 20% for 85 and over, respectively. In the case of the number of
bedrooms
, 35.4% of private houses with one resident had 2
bedrooms
, which was followed by 3
bedrooms
with 29.8% and
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by 28%, respectively.
However
, Only less than 7% of one-person households had 4 or more
bedrooms
.
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