You have bought a washing machine. First you found that the machine did not work properly, and you had it changed. Then you found that the new one seriously entangled the clothes. Write to the manager of the company to complain about it. In your letter: - State your reason for writing, - Describe the problems, - Ask the provider to solve the problem

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you in regard to the washing machine I bought in your shop

last

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month.

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device was replaced but does not work properly again. Let me please elaborate on my concern about

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case.

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, the washing machine did not work in a speed mode.

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, a quick laundry was not possible. I complained about

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issue to your service centre. After that, the device was changed within two days. Unfortunately, the new one seriously entangled the clothes. It is unacceptable because it damages expensive outfits. I hope that

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email will draw your attention to my claim and help to fix

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problem. I prefer to get a refund

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of changing the washing machine for the third time. I would appreciate it if you reply to my email by the end of the week and organize a return as soon as possible. Best regards, John Smith

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

158 words

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