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The chart below shows the amount of energy generated from wind in four countries from 1985 to 2000.

The chart below shows the amount of energy generated from wind in four countries from 1985 to 2000.
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The given bar graph illustrates the information about the
wind
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-power production of four different countries (India, Denmark, Germany, and the United
States
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) between 1985 and 2000.
Overall
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, there is a rise in the generated
energy
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 in all countries except the United
States
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. The power had been measured in
megawatt-hours
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. Turning to the United
States
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, in 1985 they produced 1200
megawatt-hours
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 of
wind
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energy
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.
Then
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 it rose gradually by 1630
megawatt-hours
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.
However
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, after 1990 it fell down by 1500
megawatt-hours
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.
Moreover
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, the given graph reveals that
wind
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-generated
energy
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 in the United
States
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 has fluctuated in the entire span. Regarding three other countries, there is an increase in the production of
wind
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energy
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 over the given period. When it comes to the
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wind-power
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power
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, which was generated by Denmark rocketed from 220
megawatt-hours
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 to 1630
megawatt-hours
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. Another key point is that the produced
wind
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 power in India has doubled year by year over the 15-year period.
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, it is witnessed that the production of
wind
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energy
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 in Germany has increased slightly over the given period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words states, energy, megawatt-hours, wind with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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