The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999

The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999
The line graph illustrates the number of visitors in the United Kingdom and the
UK
residents
travelling abroad between 1979 and 1999, and the bar chart compares the most popular countries visited by the citizens of the
UK
in 1999. It is measured in millions.
Overall
, it can be seen that the number of visitors to and from the
UK
increased significantly. It can
also
be seen that France was the most popular country to go to.
To begin
, visits abroad by
UK
residents
started at 11
million
in 1979 which later rose dramatically to about 52 over the next twenty years,
whereas
visits to the
UK
by those people living overseas began fairly at 10
million
.
Then
, it grew minimally to end the year at 27. The most popular country visited by
UK
residents
was France which stood at 12
million
and was considerably higher than the other five countries. Followed by Spain which accepted around 9
million
UK
residents
.
Then
, the USA, Greece and Turkey accounted for 4,3 and 2
million
respectively.
Finally
, Turkey has the lowest
UK
Correct quantifier usage
number of UK
show examples
citizens.
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