The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999

The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999
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The line graph illustrates the number of visitors in the United Kingdom and the
UK
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residents
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travelling abroad between 1979 and 1999, and the bar chart compares the most popular countries visited by the citizens of the
UK
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in 1999. It is measured in millions.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the number of visitors to and from the
UK
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increased significantly. It can
also
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be seen that France was the most popular country to go to.
To begin
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, visits abroad by
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residents
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started at 11
million
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in 1979 which later rose dramatically to about 52 over the next twenty years,
whereas
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visits to the
UK
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by those people living overseas began fairly at 10
million
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.
Then
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, it grew minimally to end the year at 27. The most popular country visited by
UK
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residents
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was France which stood at 12
million
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and was considerably higher than the other five countries. Followed by Spain which accepted around 9
million
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UK
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residents
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.
Then
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, the USA, Greece and Turkey accounted for 4,3 and 2
million
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respectively.
Finally
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, Turkey has the lowest
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UK
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number of UK
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citizens.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, residents, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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