The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.

The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.
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The first diagram reveals the number of visitors to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999.
Additionally
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, the below bar chart illustrates information regarding the most travelled nations the residents in 1999.
To begin
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with, the line graph demonstrates that UK citizens were going abroad more frequently, over 50
million
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in 1999 and roughly 13
million
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in 1979. Generally speaking, it underwent continuous growth and soared from around 1986 at a staggering speed.
On the other hand
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, foreign tourists
also
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gradually increased from approximately 10
million
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in 1979, and
then
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28
million
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in 1999.
Overall
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, it is evident that UK travellers to overseas countries have a more significant climb compared to the other line. The second figure provided shows the most popular regions for the United Kingdom dwellers in 1999. Obviously, France had the highest number counted, at nearly 12
million
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, followed by Spain at 9
million
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.
However
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, the following ranking which includes the USA, Greece and Turkey, has similar figures that around 2.5 to 4.5
million
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per year.
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