You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. A friend has invited you to a party but you will not be able to attend. Write to your friend. In your letter •Tell your friend you can’t come •Explain why you are unable to attend •Arrange another time to meet

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Dear Jessi, I am writing

this

letter to apologise for not being able to attend your party

this

weekend and I hope to meet you again

at the end

of summer around 25th July. Unexpectedly, I need to go back to my hometown for a family reunion because my cousin who lives in the US would like to meet us after 10 years of studying abroad. To be honest,

this

such

a big event for our family and relatives to see each other after a year of working hard.

Moreover

, my cousin and I had spent a lovely childhood in the countryside, and I think

this

time would be great for us to recall all the sweet memories. Regrettably, the event will be at the same time as your party which

is make

Wrong verb form

makes

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me feel sorry to miss

this

time. Once again, please accept my sincere apologies for not meeting at the party. Hopefully, we will still have a chance to enjoy our trip on 25th July for our late birthday celebration. Yours sincerely, My My

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that your ideas flow logically from one paragraph to another. Transitions could be more smoothly integrated between the explanation for not attending and the arrangement for a future meeting.

task achievement

Your letter successfully covers all the task requirements. However, to improve further, try to expand each point with more detail and clearly defined reasons for your inability to attend, making your writing more compelling.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

177 words

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