The charts show the sale of five different kinds of jam from 2009 to 2014.

The charts show the sale of five different kinds of jam from 2009 to 2014.
The line graph illustrates the sale of various types of jam between 2009 and 2014.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the figure for strawberries had the highest number of sales,
while
The plum had the lowest number of sales.
Moreover
, the strawberry, raspberry, grape and cherry increased over the period in question,
while
the plum decreased.
To begin
with, the number of strawberries increased from 3 in 2005 to 5 in 2012, before going up to 7 in the final
years
being the most sold jam over the period in question.
Furthermore
, the raspberry grew gradually from over 2 to 4 in 2011 , before rising to 5 in 2012 and maintaining the same level in the final
years
. The figure for grapes grew marginally from 0 to over 4 in the final
years
. With regards to cherry, it was erratic from under 2 , before 2012 when it decreased gradually from 3 to over 2 in the final
years
.
However
, the plum fell from under 3 to 0 in the final
years
and was the lowest sales kind of jam over the period in question
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