The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given illustration represents the differences in spending weekly time with families in one country in two years, in 1968 and 2018.
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, it can be clearly seen that the
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of half activities decreased, one has not changed, and the others have increased. It is obvious that the biggest change had activity food, from 1968 35 per cent had decreased still approximately 17 per cent,
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Spending time on housing and leisure became popular in 2018. The
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of them increased about two times, more accurately
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percentage
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the percentage
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of housing from 10 to 18, and the leisure activity
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from 9 to 22. It could be noticed that activities
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as fuel and power, clothing and footwear, personal goods, and transporting were no more than 15 per cent. ,
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the first three activities had decreased approximately two times, and only the
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operation had increased. It is interesting to note that event household goods
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in 1968 was approximately 7, and in 2018 was not changed.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • compare
  • spending patterns
  • allocated
  • weekly income
  • significant changes
  • essential items
  • food
  • housing
  • clothing
  • leisure
  • communication
  • increase
  • decrease
  • twofold rise
  • substantial increase
  • quadrupling
  • declined
  • food and drink
  • slight increase
  • prioritizing
  • necessities
  • transitioned
  • portio
  • non-essential items
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