The bar chart shows the average size class in primary schools and lower secondary schools in 6 countries compared to the world average in 2006.
The presented diagram provides the average
number
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students
class
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into
schools
and lower secondary schools
in 6 distinct countries compared to the worldwide average number
in 2006.
Overall
, South Korea was
the highest average Verb problem
had
number
of pupils both in primary schools
and in secondary schools
. On the contrary
, Mexico experienced as
the lowest Change preposition
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number
of student
in primary Fix the agreement mistake
students
schools
and then
United Kingdom showed the fewest Correct your spelling
the
student
who Fix the agreement mistake
students
study
in Lower secondary Wrong verb form
studied
school
in 2016.
Upon Fix the agreement mistake
schools
further
observation, starting from the number
of Primary school student
, there was around 25 students
per class
in
average in the Change preposition
on
world
in 2016. South Korea and Japan had a higher average number
of student
than the Fix the agreement mistake
students
word
which accounted for 34 Correct your spelling
world
students
per class
and 29 students
per class
, repectively
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respectively
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Furthermore
United
Kingdom, the third highest Correct article usage
the United
student
per Fix the agreement mistake
number of students
class
in Primary school, also
had a higher number
of student
than the Fix the agreement mistake
students
world
which
around Correct pronoun usage
apply
to
27 Change preposition
apply
students
per class
. Otherwise
, the average number
of student
in the Fix the agreement mistake
students
world
still
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is still
others
countries namely Mexico, Denmark, and Iceland.
Turning to the lower secondary data, South Korea (36 Correct quantifier usage
other
students
), Japan (34 students
), and Mexico (30 students
) were the three highest number
of students
per class
in 2016. They were defeated the
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by the
world
student
number
which only around to
27 Change preposition
apply
students
in class
. On the other hand
, The data of student
number
per Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
class
in United
Kingdom, Denmark and Ireland showed a considerable Correct article usage
the United
below the
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below-the-world
world
data which accounted for 18 students
, 21 students
, and 20 students
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