The chart below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six science-related subjects at a UK university in 2009. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six science-related subjects at a UK university in 2009.

summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart depicts the
number
of
students
who study in 6 distinct science subjects categorized into men and
women
at a certain UK university in 2009.
Overall
, both males and females had the highest
number
of research
pupils
in biology
subject
.
On the contrary
,
women
had the least
number
of participants in physics and men showed the fewest
number
of research
students
in veterinary medicine. Upon
further
observation, biology
subject
experienced as the most popular field in a UK university. The males and females had the most
number
among 5 other subjects which accounted for 230-man
students
and 200-woman
students
.
Furthermore
, physics was the second most popular
subject
for male
pupils
with around 220
students
.
However
, there was a huge gap between men and
women
in physics subjects where female
students
were only around 40
students
. Turning to the other remaining data, veterinary medicine became the only
subject
that had a higher
number
of female
students
than male. There were around 120
women
pupils
compared to around 80 male
pupils
.
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