Some working parents think that children centers can give the best care for the children, while others think that family members like grandparents can do this job. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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workload, there’s

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enough time available for some working parents to take good

care

of their

children

. Some of them contend that

children

should be sent to

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while

others leave their parenting burdens to other family members. From my perspective, taking

care

of them cannot be the responsibility of the

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or family members only.

While

it is hard to give equal attention to each child there,

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are advantageous to

children

’s development. First off, it can provide professional service with teaching staff, professional guidance in

children

’s early

stage

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and facilities available for

children

’s intelligence development,

besides

, all mentioned above usually show up with educational games that

children

adore much.

Additionally

,

children

will get in touch with a wider community in

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centers

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can participate in a variety of group projects, and learn how to communicate and cooperate with others as well, all-around development can be inspired during the process.

However

, only relying on

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centers

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is not enough to be a good caregiver.

Therefore

,

grandparents

should be involved in

this

respect. Obviously, taking

care

of

children

is physically demanding for senior people as they are easy to be exhausted.

Conversely

, there is a strong emotional bond

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between

grandparents

and grandchildren, it guarantees that

grandparents

will devote enough love and

care

to younger generations in a family.

Grandparents

usually

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with various practical

experience

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,

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their retirement,

grandparents

will have amount of time to accompany

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the whole family, which can release the pressure of working parents

of giving

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care

to their

children

. In conclusion, even though

children

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centers

can provide more professional services, internal factors in family should not be missed,

children

need love and companionship from home as

also

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.