The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The presented chart provides a comprehensive comparison of the survey results about
people
's habit
in purchasing and consuming Fix the agreement mistake
habits
coffee
and tea in five distinct Australia
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Australian
cities
.
Overall
, four out five
given Change preposition
of five
cities
(Sydney
, Melbourne, Briban
, and Hobart) had the highest proportion number of Correct your spelling
Brisbane
people
who went to a cafe for coffee
or tea in last
4 weeks. Correct article usage
the last
Moreover
, the percentage of citizens who tent
to buy fresh Verb problem
tried
coffee
in last
4 weeks was the Correct article usage
the last
least
among other habits in all Correct word choice
lowest
cities
.
Upon further
observation, people
in Sydney
, Melbourne, Brisbane and hobart
had Change the capitalization
Hobart
a
completely precise Correct article usage
apply
of
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apply
the
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coffee
consumption habbits
. Experiencing Correct your spelling
habits
coffee
in the caffe
had the highest proportion among 2 other activities. Correct your spelling
cafe
Sydney
, Melbourne and Hobart experienced relatively similar number
around 62% Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
while
Brisbane showed a slightly below 3 others that
roughly around 53%. The proportion of Correct pronoun usage
apply
people
who purchased fresh coffee
and instant coffe
in Correct your spelling
coffee
Sydney
was rather the same around 43% eventhough
buying fresh Correct your spelling
even though
coffee
remained the least
. In Brisban, there was a huge difference between the number of Correct word choice
lowest
people
who consumed instant coffee
and fresh coffee
which accounted for 51% and 32% respectively.
Turning to the others
remaining data, Adelaide's Correct quantifier usage
other
people
who bought instant coffee
in last
4 weeks (50%) outnumbered dine-in habits that around 39%. Correct article usage
the last
Furthermore
, fresh coffee
consumption also
showed a similar pattern compared to four other cities
as the least preference among people
in Adelaide with around 32%.Submitted by zia_ardhi on
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