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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. task 1

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The given picture displays the design of Southwest Airport at the current time and its remodelling for the next year.
Overall
, the airport is going to be expanded with more services for both sections of passengers and there will be more doors on both sides.
First,
the number of gates will increase from 8 doors to 18 doors,
while
 people will be transported to each gate by a new train and the walkway path will be demolished. In the departure section, the cafe will be replaced by the check-in desk and moved to the right side of the entrance door.
Besides
, there will be built a new bag drop part in place of the previous check-in and after the passport control desk, shops will be set up. In the arrival part, a cafe and the ATM are going to be placed on the right side.
Moreover
, a car rental company will hire a shop in the right corner of the arrival hull just below the ATM.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • terminal
  • runway
  • refurbishment
  • redevelopment
  • amenities
  • car park
  • hangar
  • concourse
  • public transport hub
  • access roads
  • boarding gates
  • check-in desk
  • baggage claim
  • departure lounge
  • observation deck
  • duty-free shopping
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