Write about the following topic: Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

some
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Some
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people believe that teaching
children
at
home
is best for a
child
's development
while
others think that it is important for
children
to go to
school
.
Although
educating a
child
's with quality is
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the responsible
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responsible
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responsibility
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for
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of
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government
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the government
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and the
citizen's
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citizens
citizen
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. Teaching
a
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children
a child
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children
at
home
is best for a
child
's development.Educating
in
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at
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home
is stressless and they
felt
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find it
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easy to
study
there
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because there
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not be
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are
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any
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no
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conditions to do the
work
.Some
child's
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children
child
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don't take any
responsibilities
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responsibility
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to
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for studying
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study
they can do what they think.Some
child
's they love to
study
and if they
felt
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feel
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tired can
child's
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children
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take a break often they
study
without any stress if any health issues
caused
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are caused
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to
child's
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children
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they can take a long break there
are
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is
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no attendance for that and there
is
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are
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no fees for educating
childrens
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children
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at
home
.They can
also
refer to
google
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Google
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if any
doubts
and they can save more time.They can
study
more when
compare
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compared
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to
school
and they cover the full portions very quickly.When they are
in
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apply
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alone they know how to tackle the problems with the portions.They spend most of
the
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their
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time with their families and they can't
felt
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feel
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that they
were
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are
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not separated
with
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from
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their families.Surprisingly no
homeworks
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homework
to
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for
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the
students
they
feel
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felt
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free
study
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to study
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and no punishments were given by teachers if they
were
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did
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not do the
work
.
some
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Some
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peoples
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people
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taught
that is
important for
childrens
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children
children's
to go to
school
.A
school
is a place for educating
childrens
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children
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with
best
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the best
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quality.
Governments
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Government
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schools
are there for free education and some private
schools
that
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apply
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are paid.
School
is the best place to learn to be good
citizen
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citizens
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with
standarized
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standardised
educational methods like
task
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tasks
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given by teachers
if
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If
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they are done
their
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with their
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work
punishments will given by teachers.
Students
would
afraid
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be afraid
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of teacher's punishments and they do their
work
properly.There are more protocols followed by
schools
to ensure the education system of the country.
Teacher
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Teachers
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would clear the
doubts
if any
doubts
raised
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were raised
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to
students
insomecases
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in some cases
,they practically clear the
doubts
with their subjects.In
schools
lab facilities available to the
students
for their practicals
this
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This
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would be play
a
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an
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important role they can understand easily by practice.In
schools
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,schools
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they can play with their friends and
study
the
standarized
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standardised
portions. In
conclusions
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conclusion
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,
that is
important for
childrens
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children
children's
to go to
school
eventhough
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even though
teaching
a
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apply
show examples
children
at
home
is stressless but
that is
important to go to
school
for teaching
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to teach
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a
child's
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child
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with
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apply
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the
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apply
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standarized
Correct your spelling
standardised
educational methods.
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