Some people therefore think that government should pay university fees for students who study subjects that are needed by society.those who choose to study less relevant subjects should not receive government funding… Would the advantage of such an educational policy outweigh the disadvantages?

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undoubtably

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true

students

should be received subside by

government

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as

this

educational supply can have

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a positive

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effect on

society

. Since in modern

society

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some specific

fields

need experts more than others, these

fields

should be taken into consideration more.

Therefore

, It is suggested that the

government

should pay the

tuitions

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of the

students

who study

the

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subjects

related to

society

and others should not

to

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be paid

scholarship

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.

This

approach has pros and cons

which

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I strongly disagree with the opinion

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say

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its advantages outweigh its disadvantages. Several

subjects

taught at universities

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an essential role in societies.

Therefore

, some people believe that the

government

are responsible for taking action to pay the university fees of

students

who study in important

fields

.

Also

, they argue that other less relevant

subjects

are not important and the

students

in these

fields

should pay for their tuition themselves.

This

leads to the

raise

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of demands in the special

subjects

.

Therefore

, most

of

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students

are willing to attend some special courses including fund and their interest in other

subjects

like art and literature will decrease.

Consequently

, it has several pros and cons. From a negative point of view, some

subjects

that are denied by the

government

may be missed in the long term.

Moreover

, all

subjects

play an integrable role in

a

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society

and prioritizing part of them can be listed as a threat to others.

In addition

, creating an unfair approach makes a sense of inequitable among

students

so it can lower the

government

's popularity among

students

.

On the other hand

, funding

students

with specific

subjects

leads to improvement in those parts. To be more specific, if

students

enrol in

subjects

that are needed by

society

more than other

subjects

, the number of experts

on

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that field will grow

up

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and

society

become stronger in that field.

For example

, all societies around the world need to progress in science and medicine.

As a result

, when there is

a

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favoritism

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in these

fields

by the

government

at universities,

students

go for them and these

fields

are more likely to get

promotionsx

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promotions

which has numerous benefits in

society

.

To conclude

,

although

prioritizing

subjects

at university has a lot of advantages for progress in that field and following that progress in

the

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societies happens, in my opinion, unfairness always results in numerous disadvantages which are worse.