Some people therefore think that government should pay university fees for students who study subjects that are needed by society.those who choose to study less relevant subjects should not receive government funding… Would the advantage of such an educational policy outweigh the disadvantages?

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educational supply can have

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some specific

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need experts more than others, these

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should be taken into consideration more.

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should pay the

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of the

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who study

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and others should not

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be paid

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approach has pros and cons

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its advantages outweigh its disadvantages. Several

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taught at universities

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an essential role in societies.

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, some people believe that the

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are responsible for taking action to pay the university fees of

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who study in important

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, they argue that other less relevant

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are not important and the

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in these

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should pay for their tuition themselves.

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of demands in the special

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are willing to attend some special courses including fund and their interest in other

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like art and literature will decrease.

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, it has several pros and cons. From a negative point of view, some

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that are denied by the

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may be missed in the long term.

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society

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and prioritizing part of them can be listed as a threat to others.

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, creating an unfair approach makes a sense of inequitable among

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so it can lower the

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's popularity among

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, funding

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with specific

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leads to improvement in those parts. To be more specific, if

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enrol in

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that are needed by

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more than other

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, the number of experts

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that field will grow

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and

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become stronger in that field.

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favoritism

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in these

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by the

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at universities,

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go for them and these

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are more likely to get

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which has numerous benefits in

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.

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prioritizing

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at university has a lot of advantages for progress in that field and following that progress in

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societies happens, in my opinion, unfairness always results in numerous disadvantages which are worse.