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it is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents,for instance for sport or music,and others are not.However,it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. discuss both these views and giveyour opinions.

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Talent
 and
skills
 are two contrary ways of knowing something,
talent
 is ingrained in a
person
whereas
skills
 are learned. Both of them have their own set of pros and cons but it can never be said success can be achieved only through
talent
.
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 essay will focus on how talents and
skills
 help
person
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a person
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 succeed with relevant examples. I partially agree with the fact that
people
 born with
talent
 have it
easy
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 than the
people
 who learn it. We see a lot of players struggling to perform well in their sports because of genetics. There are great personalities like Aryabhatta who was extremely intelligent,he had no access to
internet
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 but he could come up with mind-blowing ideas like the invention of zero and determining the value of pi. A lot of
people
 believed that he was naturally gifted.
Then
 there
are
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 a different set of
people
 who very firmly believe that everything can be learnt or understood.
Skills
 are extremely important for improving your attributes and promoting good work.
Skills
 can be learned and improved with proper guidance. There are remarkable personalities who have made it so big in life by only using their
skills
 right. Ratan Tata did not have a
well established
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 business, he started everything from scratch by setting up India's first industry in Jamshedpur. He had immense dedication,hard work and perseverance to achieve great heights and make his country proud.
To conclude
with
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,
talent
 and
skills
 are quite different from each other but there is nothing in
this
 world that cannot be
learnt
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. A
person
 born with
talent
also
 has to train himself to identify his
strength
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strengths
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 and
weakness
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weaknesses
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whereas
 a
person
 who learns a particular skill probably has a better understanding of the task.
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