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In many countries, today crime novels, and TV Crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime friction and TV crime dramas

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I am writing to
wonder
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 about some electrical goods. I am interested in a purchase of a
refregirator
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refrigerator
 for my bar. It needs to be not bigger
then
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than
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 one meter tall and does not have a freezing camera. I am planning to use it as a fruit storage. Do you have something like
this
 or maybe you will be able to order it?
Moreover
, I would like to know its price. The thing is, I
spended
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spent
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 most of my money on
a new tables
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a new table
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, so I do not have a lot of finances. If you have something that fits
to
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this
descryption
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description
, I would like to purchase it. Since I am not able to pick it up in one day, I would like to wander about the possibility of holding it for me. I would like to know a time limit when I will be able to come and take it. I hope to hear your reply soon. Yours faithfully,
Basli
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Basil
 Turkin.
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