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The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The figure illustrates the direction with regards to the value of fast
food
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 consumed in Melbourne in 3 different years.
Overall
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, what stands out from the data is that the need for junk
food
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 steadily increases.
While
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 Hamburger holds the number 1 spot, salad took the
last
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. In 2005, the amount of hamburger consumption was 40
units
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 and served as the favourite
food
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 compared to the rest before decreasing by 2
units
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 at present.
However
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, the salad was the least favoured in 2005 at 5
units
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 but witnessed a dramatic annual rise at present that doubled the number and is predicted to doubly increase in the future by 41
units
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.
Whereas
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, hamburgers still hold the number 1 spot in the foreseeable future at 51
units
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. In more detail, surprisingly fried rice and noodles had the same value in 2005 at 6
units
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. Both fast
food
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 experienced a steady increase but hovered at the same level at present and stayed relatively low compared to the other in the given period and are anticipated to stay at 9
units
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 in 2025.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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