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Many feel that going to the gym is the best way to stay fit. Other think there are more effective methods. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Presently, the topic of the role of weight loss is an important discussion point.
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, the majority of people have different views on how to the field to keep fit, whether for going to the field or other ways of effective methods. The writer of
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 requires spending some cash for the
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 which has
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 arm and a leg cost and weight loss practitioners have to spend it every day
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 effective too much. What is more, a community who training at the gymnasium have to make a schedule for the gymnasium class , correspondingly they need to pre-book for the class if they want to train for an hour.
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, the health club is too far away from them so it makes them become lazier
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 and boring and do not have time to go to the field. These measures are one of the things that make a majority of people do not go to the
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 too much. There are,
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, a lot of individuals who choose to do exercises at home because it is very convenient they can use anything at their house to become their exercise equipment
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 as sticks or stones, ... and they just need to imitate the YouTube video; sometimes they can run around the park
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 make them diminish the calories and have a good body shape too. So they do not spend too much time going to the
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 the money which they need to spend a lot of cash to join the training class and now they do not do
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 thing anymore. Taking everything into account, the park is the place for people who want to keep fit
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 it has some disadvantages especially weight loss practitioners do not need to go to the
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 and they can do it at home by workout friendly equipment and watching videos can help them to save a lot of things.
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Physical well-being
  • prime option
  • structured exercise routines
  • professional equipment
  • fostering an environment
  • motivation and discipline
  • counter-argument
  • outdoor activities
  • home workouts
  • cost-effectiveness
  • social and emotional satisfaction
  • team sports
  • hybrid approach
  • holistic approach
  • comprehensive benefits
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