Many feel that going to the gym is the best way to stay fit. Others think there are more effective methods.

Several individuals consider that

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would be the best for

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body

to keep fit.

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, the opposites have

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thought that

people

still have many other ways to bring benefits

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their own

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agree

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with the

idea

of having more different methods and still

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advantages. Human have

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thought of

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other treatments

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lead to an effective result

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because they can be active on their own

schedule

. They would like to create their own diet

schedule

and prepare

for

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themselves

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different diet meals.

Instead

of going to the

gym

, there are many diverse choices of sports for

people

to keep fit as we can see like yoga or ballet. They do not have to push themselves

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a hard way and still have

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good

healthy

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with

a

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idealistic

body

.

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,

people

have the opinion of more effective methods

also

because they do not have to pay

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too much money and can control their finance

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on many

others

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things

instead

of

gym

course

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and professional

sport

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clothes.

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, the

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of

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going to the

gym

to keep fit because of its hard

schedule

and its profession.

People

need to pay for a course of

practicing

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with

many

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modern

equipment

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equipments

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chose

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by the

people

who already have knowledge about

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. That would bring the best results for them

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they always focus on their plans and try hard every

day

.

Furthermore

, having your personal coach is certainly available for you in any

gym

centers

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when you rent them. That leads to the reason that you will have to be punctual and have several good

advices

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advice

in

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your diet

by

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a professor. Your daily life will be improved

day

by

day

and increase the effects more every

day

.

Moreover

, when you focus on

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schedule

and come to the

gym

center

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usually, they would offer you many free services and bargains. In conclusion, some human would like the

gym

to keep their

body

in

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fit is the best choice

whereas

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idea

of many other methods bring more

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advantages. I have my opinion on the

idea

of having your own treatments because it would be better for your mental health and you will not have the stress in your

finance

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finances

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every

months

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month

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leads

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to your free on your lifestyle