IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 8

Some argue that the climate change is an issue. Do you agree that?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
In recent years, it has been stated that climate
change
Use synonyms
 is causing critical problems. I personally agree with
this
Linking Words
 argument and in
this
Linking Words
 essay, I will explain the reasons for my view. When the weather changes, it will affect the habitats of
animals
Use synonyms
 as they may lose their living spaces or they are going to have difficulty finding food. In
this
Linking Words
 state,
animals
Use synonyms
 are forced to immigrate to places that are suitable for them to live. In some cases, they even may disappear since they can not find food or the new habitats do not match their behaviours.
As a result
Linking Words
, the biodiversity is going to
change
Use synonyms
 and face extinction of some
animals
Use synonyms
.
For instance
Linking Words
, white bears have to live on the polar side.
Due to
Linking Words
 warmer temperatures and melting ice of the polar, these bears are losing their homes and are in endanger of extinction.
Moreover
Linking Words
, climate
change
Use synonyms
 has deleterious effects on humans too. When patterns of the weather
change
Use synonyms
, there may be destructive storms or flooding rains.
As a result
Linking Words
, some parts of the earth become empty
whereas
Linking Words
 the population of other parts increases. In
this
Linking Words
 situation, there may be over-populated places as
this
Linking Words
 causes a shortage of food resources and other facilities in areas near these places.
For instance
Linking Words
, a gigantic storm called Alpha Storm hit the north of Iran and the majority of homes were destroyed.
Therefore
Linking Words
, residents of these cities relocated their houses and went to nearby cities.
As a result
Linking Words
, the price of vegetables and fruits doubled because of the new demand in the market. In conclusion, I believe that climate
change
Use synonyms
 will have deleterious effects on animal inhabitants and human life as
animals
Use synonyms
 will face extinction and humans will have difficulty with their daily needs.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: