The government should close companies that produce toxic waste materials without their own waste treatment facility in order to protect the envirnonment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

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In many countries across the world, it is argued that

people

should be predominantly focused on protecting the environment. The government should close

companies

that produce toxic

waste

materials without their own

waste

treatment facilities. I completely agree with

this

view and will give my reasons below.

Firstly

, it is necessary for all

companies

to have

waste

treatment

facility

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facilities

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. Without any recycling methods,

the

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apply

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chemical

waste

are

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dumbed in

this

world. It will become

harmfull

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harmful

to the

people

For example

the

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apply

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plastic

is the most popular

waste

which are used as

one

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use

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one-use

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product. The company must have

recycle

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a recycling

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system for their

plastic

waste

. If

this

plastic

are

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not

recyled

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recycled

, it will pollute water, land and so on. Because

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apply

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plastic

takes thousands of years to decompose on

earth

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Earth

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In addition

, there

are

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some chemical

waste

in industries,

this

waste

should be properly disposed

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of or

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recycled without

making

Verb problem

causing

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any pollution in the environment.

However

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However,

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in some petroleum industries, the chemical

waste

are

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mixed into the ocean.

Therefore

, the

spieces

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species

pieces

this

ocean are affected by

this

chemical

waste

Inspite

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In spite

this

situation there are many species in endanger.

Furthermore

, some

companies

mix their

waste

into rivers,

this

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which

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lead

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leads

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people

suffer

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suffering

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who consume river water.

This

cause

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causes

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multiple

disease

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diseases

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the

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apply

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people

around the world.

To sum up

, the

upper mentioned

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above-mentioned

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reasons let us give the opinion that

government

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the government

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should close the

companies

that

creates

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create

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pollution in the environment. And government should help to improve the

recycle

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recycling

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treatment

facility

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facilities

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among

companies

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4Word repetition
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31Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

251 words

4.00

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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