The charts show the sale of five different kinds of jam from 2009 to 2014.

The charts show the sale of five different kinds of jam from 2009 to 2014.
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The chart illustrates the five different types of jam sold in the timeline between 2009 to 2014.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the sales of strawberry jam increased significantly
whereas
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, plums dropped dramatically over the years rather than raspberry, cherry
as well as
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grape. From 2009 to 2014, the strawberry escalated its sales twice as much around 3 to 7 in the end which is far greater than other flavours but the sale of plums declined noticeably up to 0 from all over 3.
Although
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, Raspberry fluctuated wisely in the timeline but grew marginally over the years.
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, Raspberry Jam peaked in contrary to strawberries in the year 2012.
On the other hand
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, the sales of cherry spread plateaued dramatically when compared to others.
while
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the grape increased consistently even though it positioned in third place.
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