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Since some children do not seem to have natural abilities to learn a language. School should not force students to learn a foreign language . How far do you agree with the statement?

#children #abilities #language #school #force #students
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It is true that some people complain that
children
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 should not be forced to learn a foreign
language
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 in school.The reason for
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, the lack of real talent to study foreign
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, schools should allow pupils to make choices in learning
languages
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.Even though it is the duty of some schools,I totally disagree with
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 statement and claim
this
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 teaching should be kept. First of all,kids nowadays are not taught any more everyday jobs
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 as cleaning, and cooking.So,removing
language
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 lessons from timetables in schools can ease the way they study other teachings.It does not imply not teaching
languages
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 at all,but just post-dating for their adulthood.
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,
children
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 tend to learn quicker than the adults do.
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,in their ,adulthood it will not be simple to memorise the
language
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.It
also
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 needs to be noted that not everyone can afford to pay for people to teach their
children
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 after school.
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,
languages
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 are not only crucial for cultural aspects, but learning a
language
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 allows one to move around the world and start a better career.As an example,it would be impossible for an Italian to get a job in the United Kingdom without a better knowledge of English. In conclusion,most
children
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 should be taught
language
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 lessons since it is not just important but
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 necessary for their future lives.I
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 agree that it should be compulsory to learn a
language
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 in school.
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