Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In

this

contemporary society, human living standards are improved significantly

as well as

human’s

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rights.

However

, there remains a controversial topic about whether online purchasing

gain

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benefits from advanced machinery or not. In my opinion, I think that advanced technologies have a significantly bad impact on both purchaser and manufacturer, which outweighed the advantages

To begin

with, it is generally believed that online shopping maximizes the huge amount of time for youngsters in

this

technological era. Clearly,

instead

of queuing

hours

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and hours or spending time travelling, shoppers just stay in front of a computer screen with a click to choose a variety of desiring items.

For instance

, hunting for concert or football tickets is absolutely a headache for former-era people

due to

the tremendous time and effort people have to spend waiting.

In contrast

, it is easily solved by using a computer or website which helps consumers approach the product easily via screen.

On the other hand

, some researchers feel that focusing on the advantages of contemporary technology obscure the big picture related to their enormous disadvantages.

firstly

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,It is generally believed that online shopping is usually considered a deceptive

behavior

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that betrays customers’ emotion and their trust. Clearly, the vivid images of marketed items surely blind consumer’s decisions. As a matter of fact, the customers are the only

victim

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of the excessive marketing tool, which costs them money and a bad day.

Secondly

, the media or technology field is one of the battle fields for producers but only the more powerful ones get the advantages. They can not only use the trick of marketing on Facebook or YouTube to expand clients’ information about products but

also

disseminate intensively bad reports of their

criminal

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in terms of dominating the economic market.

Therefore

, it can affect badly to small producers and lead to the domination of business sharks.