You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
the
chart displays Remove the redundancy
apply
a
Correct article usage
the
number
of tourists went
to a specific Correct pronoun usage
who went
island
Called Caribbean
during 3 years between 2010 to 2017.
Correct article usage
the Caribbean
Overall
, Correct article usage
the anumber
anumber
of Correct your spelling
number
visitor
staying on Fix the agreement mistake
visitors
ships
were fluctuated
. Change to the active voice
fluctuated
have fluctuated
besidies
, there was a fluctuation in Correct your spelling
besides
number
of visitors Staying on Change the article
a number
the number
island
but generally trend was an Add an article
the island
increase
trend . Change the verb form
increasing
the
chart displays on years and Capitalize word
The
number
of visitors.
To begin
with, as We Said before the following was up words trends generally. Secondly
, the number
of people in
2010 to 2011 Change preposition
from
were
Verb problem
apply
increase
but member of visitors staying on Wrong verb form
increased
island
was above Add an article
the island
who
were staying on Correct pronoun usage
those who
ships
. It recorded in 2010 just Over 0.5 millions
and just under 0.5 million respectively. And in 2011 just over Change to singular
million
0.5millions
and Correct your spelling
0.5 million
0.5millions
respectively . Correct your spelling
0.5 million
In
addition
people who Add a comma
,addition
staying
on Wrong verb form
stayed
island
Add an article
the island
continue
to be above Wrong verb form
continued
who
Correct pronoun usage
those who
staying
in Wrong verb form
stayed
chips
until 2015 Capitalize word
Chips
to
Socore Change preposition
apply
on
Change preposition
apply
it
1.5 Correct pronoun usage
apply
millions
on Change to singular
million
island
, and Socre just under 1.5 Add an article
the island
an island
millions
on Change to singular
million
ships
. Finally
people who live onAdd a comma
,Finally
Correct article usage
the
Island
become under those who live in
Change preposition
on
ships
to hit 1.5 millions
, and just Change to singular
million
obove
1.5 Correct your spelling
above
millioms
respectively.Correct your spelling
million
millions
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, island, ships, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "displays" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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