Some people feel that manufactures and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of foods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, our planet

polluted

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by different things.

However

, the main factor is

a

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the

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big

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large

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amount

of packaging of food. People

divided

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are divided

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into two groups. The first group believes that responsible

about

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for

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this

issue must be

manufactures

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manufacturers

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and

supermarkets

.

Nevertheless

, the second group reckons that customers of these

supermarkets

should refuse

buying

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to buy

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things

which

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that

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contain a lot of packaging. From my perspective, I do not have a concrete position. So, in

this

essay

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I will

further

explore

this

thought-provoking question. On the one hand,

supermarkets

and

manufactures

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manufacturers

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have a big responsibility

about

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for

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it.

Firstly

, if

this

package

made

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is made

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of plastic

supermarkets

should

to

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apply

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replace it

to

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with

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another material

which

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that

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can be recycled.

For instance

, paper or cardboard.

In addition

, if

there

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they

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are using a big

amount

of packaging

manufactures

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manufacturers

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have to shrink

this

amount

in order to save more materials for another batch of goods.

On the other hand

, consumers should be responsible too.

To begin

with, it is our planet and it is our choice to protect it. So, if

manufactures

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manufacturers

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and

supermarkets

do not care about it we should.

For example

, we can avoid using

of

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apply

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big

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large

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amount

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amounts

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of packaging.

Furthermore

, we can buy reusable

package

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packages

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for all goods

instead

of disposable packages.

Moreover

, in

supermarkets

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,supermarkets

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there are

also

goods from various

manufactures

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manufacturers

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which are

eco friendly

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eco-friendly

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.

As a result

, we as consumers need to support

this companies

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this company

these companies

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and consume their products. In conclusion, from my point of view, consumers and

manufactures

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manufacturers

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with

supermarkets

have to cooperate in order to get good quality output and entirely avoid

this

problem.