Some people feel that manufactures and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of foods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, our planet
polluted
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by different things.
However
, the main factor is
a
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big
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large
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amount
of packaging of food. People
divided
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are divided
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into two groups. The first group believes that responsible
about
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this
issue must be
manufactures
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manufacturers
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and
supermarkets
.
Nevertheless
, the second group reckons that customers of these
supermarkets
should refuse
buying
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to buy
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things
which
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that
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contain a lot of packaging. From my perspective, I do not have a concrete position. So, in
this
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I will
further
explore
this
thought-provoking question. On the one hand,
supermarkets
and
manufactures
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manufacturers
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have a big responsibility
about
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it.
Firstly
, if
this
package
made
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of plastic
supermarkets
should
to
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replace it
to
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with
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another material
which
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that
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can be recycled.
For instance
, paper or cardboard.
In addition
, if
there
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they
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are using a big
amount
of packaging
manufactures
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manufacturers
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have to shrink
this
amount
in order to save more materials for another batch of goods.
On the other hand
, consumers should be responsible too.
To begin
with, it is our planet and it is our choice to protect it. So, if
manufactures
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manufacturers
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and
supermarkets
do not care about it we should.
For example
, we can avoid using
of
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big
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large
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amount
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amounts
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of packaging.
Furthermore
, we can buy reusable
package
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packages
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for all goods
instead
of disposable packages.
Moreover
, in
supermarkets
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,supermarkets
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there are
also
goods from various
manufactures
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manufacturers
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which are
eco friendly
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eco-friendly
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.
As a result
, we as consumers need to support
this companies
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these companies
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and consume their products. In conclusion, from my point of view, consumers and
manufactures
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with
supermarkets
have to cooperate in order to get good quality output and entirely avoid
this
problem.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • supply chain
  • sustainable packaging alternatives
  • industry standards
  • consumer behavior
  • informed purchasing decisions
  • market pressure
  • environmental impact
  • conscientious shopping habits
  • financial resources
  • research and development
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