Some people feel that manufactures and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of foods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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polluted
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the
big
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large
amount
of packaging of food. People Use synonyms
divided
into two groups. The first group believes that responsible Add a missing verb
are divided
about
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for
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manufactures
and Correct your spelling
manufacturers
supermarkets
. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, the second group reckons that customers of these Linking Words
supermarkets
should refuse Use synonyms
buying
things Change the verb form
to buy
which
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further
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thought-provoking question.
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supermarkets
and Use synonyms
manufactures
have a big responsibility Correct your spelling
manufacturers
about
it. Change preposition
for
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, if Linking Words
this
package Linking Words
made
of plastic Add a missing verb
is made
supermarkets
should Use synonyms
to
replace it Change the verb form
apply
to
another material Change preposition
with
which
can be recycled. Correct pronoun usage
that
For instance
, paper or cardboard. Linking Words
In addition
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are using a big Correct pronoun usage
they
amount
of packaging Use synonyms
manufactures
have to shrink Correct your spelling
manufacturers
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amount
in order to save more materials for another batch of goods.
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On the other hand
, consumers should be responsible too. Linking Words
To begin
with, it is our planet and it is our choice to protect it. So, if Linking Words
manufactures
and Correct your spelling
manufacturers
supermarkets
do not care about it we should. Use synonyms
For example
, we can avoid using Linking Words
of
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apply
big
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large
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amount
of packaging. Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
Furthermore
, we can buy reusable Linking Words
package
for all goods Fix the agreement mistake
packages
instead
of disposable packages. Linking Words
Moreover
, in Linking Words
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supermarkets
there are Add a comma
,supermarkets
also
goods from various Linking Words
manufactures
which are Correct your spelling
manufacturers
eco friendly
. Add a hyphen
eco-friendly
As a result
, we as consumers need to support Linking Words
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this companies
and consume their products.
In conclusion, from my point of view, consumers and Change the determiner
this company
these companies
manufactures
with Replace the word
manufacturers
supermarkets
have to cooperate in order to get good quality output and entirely avoid Use synonyms
this
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