The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart illustrates the ten
countries
which are the top ten countries
in manufacturing and consuming electricity
by their rank
in 2014. As an overview, China
had the first
rank
in both production
and consumption
among other countries
in 2014.On the other hand
, Korea has the least production
and consumption
among those countries
in the given time period. This
country has a negligible difference
in both criteria that are discussed for electricity
with the rank
9th country which is Germany.
As can be observable, China
achieved the first
rank
in production
by producing 5498 billion kWh
which is a significant difference
from the United States
, which held the second rank
in manufacturing.To be more precise, China
produces approximately 1300 kWh
more than the United States
.There is a huge difference
in the number (nearly 3000 kW) between the United States
and Russia ,which are in the second and third rank
respectively, in the production
of electricity
. Afterwards ,Change preposition
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russia
there are insignificant differences in manufacturing between the Change the capitalization
Russia
countries
.
Furthermore
, China
also
held the first
rank
in consumption
with 5322 kWh
.There is a roughly 1400 kWh
difference
between the first
and second ranks in the given graph. The highest difference
between ranks in electricity
consumption
belongs to the United States
and Russia with close to a 2800 kWh
difference
. The differences in production
among other countries
are insignificant.Submitted by hedoyeraisy on
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